Author: tine_cheese
Rating: PG-13
Length: oneshot
Warnings: Yaoi
Genre: Romance
Pairings: YunJae, OTP 5
Summary: The guys get to have time to themselves and decide to go to the club. As they wait, a simple, mere yet important happening changes their out look on things.



AN: So I lost my vision for this and I wrote the ending a few minutes ago. XD 12:17 AM ya'll. haha. Hmm~ I have to say, I read this over and over again and~ my vocab....is improving quite a bit! I must say 8D hahaha. Hmmm...I understand this really has no story, rather just a long drabble no? xD I'll mention again that I've lost the big picture on this one shot but I wanted to post it anyway because I mean-- I worked hard on the beginning!! XDD I apologize for the slow updates for...hmm... Role Playing's got me hooked. Though I am making time to write again! And I've almost finished a chapter of both my on-going series and if there was just more time to work on them, I would~! ....I think I should make an organized agenda for what I should work on while online. Har har. anyhow~! I thank you for reading, comments are always loved~! Believe in the power of these five guys, believe in their close, tight relationship as a family-- their couple pairings whether real or not-- their relationships alone are golden treasures hard to find. (And this Author's note is waaaay too long. xD I guess I seem to ramble on late at night huh? But yeah~ xDDD Always keep the faith <3!!!

Seriously.

What the fuck?

......Keep the faith and they show this? I mean-- SERIOUSLY?! Yunho and Changmin?

I honestly thought that the two didn't get in on it because of their acting career. But freaking serious? I can't even make a proper entry cause I'm so fucking confused about all this shit. I'm a fan whose concerned about all this as much as everyone else who's worried sick about the future of these five, awesome, talented guys who light up millions of girls' hearts. All I'm saying it that there's gotta be something wrong here.

That can't be Yunho and Changmin-- it can't be.

They're suppose to stick together. Through thick and thin and I'm thinking that if those two did oppose that they would've talked with Jaechunsu about it before all of this shit happened. SERIOUSLY. T_T How the hell am I suppose to update with all of this chaos going on?!?!?

Honestly guys, you need to keep it together. Where's are the five rising gods? Where's the tight family?

I need to wake up from this nightmare. Really. 

Title: The Chronicles of FiveDorks Chat Room 17: Please and Tease
Author: tine_cheese
Rating: PG-13
Length: ?
Warnings: Yaoi, No Plot, SMUT!
Genre: romance, drama-ish, comedy?, and randomness
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, OTP5
Summary: Five new college students find how college life really is.
Sneak peak 1
Sneak peak 2

The Trouble Making Yoochun part 1
part 2
part 3
JaeSu Wrath
Make Jaejaejoong
Apology Dinner & JunHoMin Dude Night-out
Jaejoong Out of Control
Cereal Killer?
Getting Down
FiveDork Mission #1
YunJae in Denial?
HAWT
Something go'in ON
Little Sisters Invasion
Pleasure Always Comes First part 1
Pleasure Always Comes First part2
Its so Erotic, Its Mirotic
Saying Goodbye isn't Easy
Read Summer Talent Show
( JJ: yes, dear? )
I almost barfed. Thanks.

Where the hell did you get the list of shit? You need a life, min. Sorry to say but you do. I mean, you're a hot, fine looking guy. What's wrong with you? Why don't I see you hanging, flirting around people?-- other than us of course. :D

but...the list did make me laugh. Xd and because I respect you, I hid this from my boojae. I was laughing so hard and he asked what it was and I had to lie! I had to lie to my baby! SEE THE THINGS I DO FOR YOU?!?!

You owe me. BIG.

I don't want JUST a cookie, aiight?

on second though, don't you love and hold your bananas? and your pickles? oh and cucumbers?

It would surprise me if i caught you masturbating with inanimate objects, let alone long, slender foods. haha.

Anyways Jaejoong told me to tell you that he can't make that batch of cookies cause he's too busy this week. :]

Go to the local bakery shop or something, kay? ^-^
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To: Jungbo<”ImHawtYunho@hotmail.com”>
From: Changmin THE KING <”Changmin_is@hotmail.com”>
Subject: Its a list of shit
Date: Wednesday July 1, 2009 8:23 PM

you're so unfair. :(

YOU PEOPLE HATE ME!

Just because of my beautiful body! mind! and soul! T.T it hurts to see people hating me just because of my perfections....*sighs*

WELL GUESS WHAT?!

I DON'T CARE!

CUZ I AM BEAUTIFUL NO MATTER WHAT THEY SAY~

CAUSE WORDS~ DON'T BRING ME DOWN!

OH WHOA YEAHH~

SO YOU AIN'T BRING ME DOWN TO DAY~ EHH~ YEA~


Christina's got my back. In yo small, bruised healing face!

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DEVICE IN USE: Yunho's Diary guarded by his daughter, Bambi
TIME: 7:42 PM
DATE: Saturday July 4, 2009

Its good to know my secrets are being guarded my trusted, loving daughter. :] Even though she can't talk, walk, or do anything- I still love her. And I don't care if Bambi in that Disney movie is a dude- I KNOW my OWN DAUGHTER. Anyways, I have time to write because Jaejoong's getting ready for the talent show tonight. He worked really hard on his song, for this whole week all he did was sing, sing, and sing.

Even when we're in bed he sings!

...but it is a turn on...hehe.... You know, I really can't believe Jaejoong. I can't believe how he is. I can't believe how he speaks. I can't believe how he moves. I can't believe he's mine. I mean, here I am.

Sitting on my bed, writing (in my year-old notebook/journal- which i am in need to replace. Sorry journal....you're looking a bit nasty...) waiting for my boyfriend- my godly looking, soft touching, sweet smelling, muse hearing boyfriend. What did I do to deserve such a beautiful life? I'm smiling like a geek right now.

I have an angel beside me.

-Yunho

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INSTANT MESSAGING VIA MOBILE PHONES
COMMUNICATION DEVICE: PHONES
DATE: 6/4/09
TIME: 8:31:23 A.M.
PHONE OWNERS:
JAEJOONG (JJ_shock)
CHANGMIN (Awesome)

Awesome: Sup
JJ_shock: pulp
Awesome: wth?
JJ_shock: it rhymes
JJ_shock: u should've stuck w/ ur old username
JJ_shock: smartone
Awesome: haha
JJ_shock: :]
Awesome: u ready to rock?!
Awesome: and roll!?
JJ_shock: HELL YEA!
Awesome: you ready to sing?!
JJ_shock: YEAH!
Awesome: you read to shine?!
JJ_shock: YEEAHH!
Awesome: you ready to blow all those heads off?!
JJ_shock: in a good way! YEAHHH!
Awesome: you ready to cook me cookies?!
JJ_shock: YEEEEAHHH!
JJ_shock: no. wait. what?
Awesome: YEAAAAHHH!
JJ_shock: Im not cooking any cookies
Awesome: awww
JJ_shock: fine. I'll make you some
Awesome: yaaay~
Awesome: you just made my month
JJ_shock: that doesn't mean I'm gonna make you a month's worth of cookies, Min. Hell no.
Awesome: awww
JJ_shock: deal with it
Awesome: awwww
JJ_shock: stop being such a baby
Awesome: I can act however the hell I want! >___< GET AWAY FROM ME! YOU COOKIE DEPRIVER!
JJ_shock: depriver isn't a word
Awesome: I'M SMART! I CAN COIN WORDS IF I WANT TO!
JJ_shock: you need some friends
Awesome: I know
JJ_shock: maybe if you just stop being so smart all the time
Awesome: the level of my knowledge isn't the problem here okay?! Its the people!
JJ_shock: k. uh...I g2g
Awesome: don't leave me :[
JJ_shock: yunho's asking for help
Awesome: /)_- ) when doesn't he need help?
JJ_shock: he needs help with laundry, alright?
Awesome: fine
Awesome: leave me here to rot
JJ_shock: min
Awesome: just go to your horny boyfriend
Awesome: he's probably using that laundry thing as an excuse
Awesome: have fun getting jiggy on a washing machine
Awesome: forget about me
JJ_shock: okay. :]
JJ_shock: bye!

JJ_shock has logged off.

Awesome: dammit.
Awesome: I'm changing my username back to its rightful name.
Awesome: isn't what I'm feeling right now

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Phone Conversation
6/21/09
6:32 PM
[JJ]Jaejoong & [JS]Junsu

JJ: Yo
JS: Yo~
JJ: So
JS: So
JJ: Junsu-ah
JS: *chuckles* Jaejoong-ah
JJ: Come on! Tell me what happened!
JS: Aish, tell you what? *grins*
JJ: After you two left, what happened?
JS: Oh~ Hyuuung~ I don't kiss and tell *giggles*
JJ: Shut up and give me the details
JS: No~ I don't want to
JJ: But!
JS: I'll tell you when I get there
JJ: *sighs* Fine
JS: Oh and your award for the talent show finally came today, Yoochun's gonna give it to you later on tonight
JJ: Really?! Awesome!
JS: Yep~! I can't believe they misspelled your name wrong *chuckles*
JJ: Kim Jaejoong is a name that's envied by many people
JS: Yeah, Dim Jaedung *laughs*
JJ: They're just ignorant! God, let it go!
JS: Okay, okay-- I will. Just open the door already
JJ: Let's get the cramping on, babe~!
JS: You make it sound wrong
JJ: You just think wrong
JS: Aish--y-yah!
JJ: *chuckles*


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TEXT MESSAGING
6/21/09 8:42 PM

KIM JAEJOONG [JJ]
JUNG YUNHO [YH]

JJ: Where are you?
YH: Dance studio, why?
JJ: Nothing, just wondering
YH: ...u sure? Is Junsu still there?
JJ: No, he left a few minutes ago
YH: ah, u okay babe?
JJ: hmhm
YH: Jaejoong-ah
JJ: yes, dear?
YH: spill
JJ: you spilled something?
YH: I'm on my way, best to tell me now so I can get you something to cheer you up
YH: if you're sad, that is
JJ: why do you assume that?
YH: I know you inside and out
JJ: And?
YH: I love you :[
JJ: What is that at the end?
YH: I'm sad
JJ: that you love me?
YH: that you're not telling me what's wrong
JJ: its nothing~! Just come home in one piece, okay?
YH: I am

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AN: Damn I'm on fire! XDD Here are the updates I promised~ :D Find me in Love with you is next~!!! 8D Wondering why Jaejoongie's all sad all of a sudden?! Next chappie~! SUMMER CAMP! YEAAAH~ :D

edit: OH~! and babes! I forgot to credit urbandictionary.com for the epic shit list. XDD I know, the list is genius but sadly, it wasn't my brain that came up with it. XDDD

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Author: tine_cheese
Rating: PG-13
Length: oneshot
Warnings: Yaoi
Genre: Romance, Happiness [if that's a genre >->]
Pairings: YunJae, Yoosu, OTP 5
Summary: The umma of the group decided that they were all going to sleep together, whether they liked it or not.
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AN:Failure. /)_(\ I'm sorry. GAH. I know, I posted I was back a month ago! And....and....I'm a bad author! >_< I have to keep my priorities straight! RPing got the best of me...I apologize and I have started working on my on-going fics again. :] Expect updates now! :D My future series fics won't be posted until I am done with the whole series. XD I have decided. I don't wanna keep you guys hanging so...wish me good luck with that. XD Other than that, expect good-- better one-shots. :]

Always keep the faith! All ya'lls! KEEP THE FAITH!

So...I took this little break. And I'm ready to go back in to writing.

But before I begin to do so, I'm gonna need to do some...improvements I've noticed while I was "away". (I read my work and people's constructive comments). I saw that there's a lot of room for improvements.

I use too many similar words, my descriptions can be dull, my action sentences aren't so....colorful, story plot-- damn that gets me every single time. T.T But anyways! Just...before I begin to write any more series, one-shots, anything at all--  I want to improve. And I wanna become a better writer. I really appreciate all of those readers that added me and actually thanked me for adding because...I really should be thanking you for supporting me.

Because, if you really look at it....I suck. There's really, a bunch of people with better writing styles, vocabulary, and sentence structure. Heck I don't even have a beta. XD But for some reason, you guys like me so I really love you guys for that. Really. I mean...I haven't thought of it but I've been doing this for like....two years already and I saw that I made only little improvements here and there and I just really wanna step it up.

So! my list of improvements!!!

-Better vocabulary
 This is essential. I don't want to bore you guys with "nodding" and "sighing" and "said" all the time....I know I use those words A LOT. Forgive me... T.T

-Better sentence structure
 Fudge. Sometimes I do run-on sentences and its not good. I need to be structured! GAH.

-Better Plots
 I have plots. I have them written down by hand. I know what I'm suppose to write but for some odd, idiotic reason when I think of something else that's "better" (when its really not) I completely change it and my story's changed. Gawd I need to stop doing that! AND! I need goals....I've got so many plots but it doesn't have a goal. Why is that so hard for me?!

-Better variety
 I don't know...I just feel like I wanna do more than romance and fluff and attempt comedy...I don't wanna put "drama" as a genre I do cause I suck. BIG TIME.

-Basically Better EVERYTHING
I really wanna do better for you guys. I don't really think I'm cut out to be...this "really great author of yaoi fan fics" i just don't feel like I'm that talented.....I'm not being humble. Really. I know I need work so let me work on it. :]



SOOOO~ constructive criticism is a must!! I need more comments with criticism in them...^^; I love your usual "Good job! Update soon!" but...can you tell me what I need to work on? Please? I'll give you a cookie? XD

....erm....I think that's it!

I will be working on my current series! And look out for one-shots that'll pop up once in a while~ I'm going to attempt and do horror around...Halloween! Look forward to that....hmm....And Always keep the faith!! Dong Bang Shin Ki! FIGHTING!!!!!

Author: tine_cheese
Rating: PG
Length: oneshot
Warnings: Yaoi
Genre: Romance, Fluff?
Pairings: YunJae, Yoosu, & caring Jaemin
Summary: Jaejoong suffers from missing Yunho when the leader goes to Korea for filming while the rest of them were stuck in Japan with a day-off.

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OMG. Yunho's dreams of having babies with Jaejoong came true. XD Along with Yoosu's secret wish~
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Its been a long time. because my dad won't download adobe photoshop on this bloody parental blocked PC. DAMN THIS CONTRAPTION. TT.TT I want my laptop back..... I lost so much...smut in there. *sighs*

Anyways! I got a hold my dad's laptop and photoshop's on here soooooo! ICONS!!! ^-^

Yay~ :D


45 icons~( You know you wanna... )

Title: The Chronicles of FiveDorks Chat Room 16: Summer Talent Show part 1
Author: tine_cheese
Rating: PG-13
Length: ?
Warnings: Yaoi, No Plot, SMUT!
Genre: romance, drama-ish, comedy?, and randomness
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, OTP5
Summary: Five new college students find how college life really is.
Sneak peak 1
Sneak peak 2

 

The Trouble Making Yoochun part 1
part 2
part 3
JaeSu Wrath
Make Jaejaejoong
Apology Dinner & JunHoMin Dude Night-out
Jaejoong Out of Control
Cereal Killer?
Getting Down
FiveDork Mission #1
YunJae in Denial?
HAWT
Something go'in ON
Little Sisters Invasion
Pleasure Always Comes First part 1
Pleasure Always Comes First part2
Its so Erotic, Its Mirotic
Saying Goodbye isn't Easy

 

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I was tagged by narutocute_11 :] yay!!!! ^-^
( You know you want to click it )

Title: Yunho, I Hate you
Author: tine_cheese
Rating: NC-17
Length: onesoht
Warnings: Yaoi, SMUT!
Genre: romance, drama-ish?, Smut
Pairings: YunJae
Summary: Jaejoong's mad and Yunho knows how to calm this hot, tempered man.
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Have you heard of the song, "Just the Two of Us"- Tohoshinki????

( Its sex )

Title: The Chronicles of FiveDorks Chat Room 15: Saying Goodbye isn't Easy
Author: tine_cheese
Rating: PG-13
Length: ?
Warnings: Yaoi, No Plot, SMUT!
Genre: romance, drama-ish, comedy?, and randomness
Pairings: YunJae, YooSu, OTP5
Summary: Five new college students find how college life really is.
Sneak peak 1
Sneak peak 2

 

The Trouble Making Yoochun part 1
part 2
part 3
JaeSu Wrath
Make Jaejaejoong
Apology Dinner & JunHoMin Dude Night-out
Jaejoong Out of Control
Cereal Killer?
Getting Down
FiveDork Mission #1
YunJae in Denial?
HAWT
Something go'in ON
Little Sisters Invasion
Pleasure Always Comes First part 1
Pleasure Always Comes First part2
Its so Erotic, Its Mirotic
( Yoochun: Yes, baby. Its okay, let it out. Just pour it all out )

The Trouble Making Yoochun part 1
part 2
part 3
JaeSu Wrath
Make Jaejaejoong
Apology Dinner & JunHoMin Dude Night-out
Jaejoong Out of Control
Cereal Killer?
Getting Down
FiveDork Mission #1
YunJae in Denial?
HAWT
Something go'in ON
Little Sisters Invasion
Pleasure Always Comes First part 1
Pleasure Always Comes First part2

( Oh yeah. Its virtual. You GOT NOTHIN ON ME! WHA!  )

The Trouble Making Yoochun part 1
part 2
part 3
JaeSu Wrath
Make Jaejaejoong
Apology Dinner & JunHoMin Dude Night-out
Jaejoong Out of Control
Cereal Killer?
Getting Down
FiveDork Mission #1
YunJae in Denial?
HAWT
Something go'in ON
Little Sisters Invasion


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This post! IS a DECLARATION! THAT! I will write and complete these series! BECAUSE HECK! I stayed up waaaay pass my bed time to finish these plots! :D and just in case someone gets the same idea as me and then writes it first! (because I'm such a slow-poke at updating!) so...yeah. And it'll be a little sneak peak for people who like reading my Yunjae works. :D

SO!

Lover in a Box
23 year old Jung Yunho's the perfect bachelor-- only problem is that he's too much of a workaholic to find a partner. He's forgetting birthdays and special family events and this guy does not see any difference in his life-- truth to be told, he loves working. Knowing that he has something to live for and that something is working is enough for him. On his 24th up-coming birthday, his closest friends: Park Yoochun, Kim Junsu, and Shim Changmin (mostly Yoochun) thought of giving this workaholic BFF a very special present...to lift up all his troubles. But the thing was, those three friends thought they were getting him something of the opposite sex.

hehehehehehehehe. I'm already starting on this. :D slowly writing the 1st chapter!

THIS ONE: this next one I'm totally happy about cause its something I've never done BEFORE. :D Horror.

Welcome to the Mirror House
Dong Bang Shin Ki just got off their Japan tour and got a 1 week and a half to relax. Yunho and Jaejoong were still going strong with their relationship and so was Junsu and Yoochun, they were happy as happy can be and to add in the picture-- Changmin also got himself a boyfriend: Joo Yeohyuk; who was going to finally meet the group. Once they meet, they all decided to have their vacation in Jeju Island since Changmin's boyfriend grew up there and somehow, So Nyeo Shi Dae's leader-- Taeyeon tagged along to this little trip of theirs. Yeohyuk was all around, telling the group of his childhood and found an old mirror. Jaejoong took a fond of various mirrors and examined it, finding incitals carved on the back of the mirror. It read: KJJ ♥ JYH. Jaejoong smiled and thought it was a pretty...narrow coincidence but since he loved mirrors, asked Yeohyuk if he could keep it. Yeohyuk nodded and kept on with his childhood tour and told the group about his childhood friend who died in a fire. The next day, things started getting a little...different but Jaejoong just shook the feeling off. A few days after, the group decided to go to the local carnival and saw a tempting Mirror House. They were all up for it but Taeyeon needed to use the restrooms, so she told the guys to just go on without her because she would just catch up. Walking to the same spot she remembered where the Mirror House would be, to her surprise it wasn't there and so weren't the boys.

hehehehehe. yeah. so i will work hard on the series I'm working on and hopefully! I will be able to write them all. :D yay!!!